Post by Kim Miller on Dec 10, 2006 13:44:07 GMT -5
Evauations
(Quick suggestion: personalities are helpful in eveluations. Since you didnt do it for any of your horses, I changed it to overall, but personas really do help)
Lightening Strikes
Name: 10/10
Heritage: 5/10
Show Record: 8/10
Pictures: 9/10
Overall: 9/10
Total: 41/50, 82%, B-
Comments: Nice horse overall, could use more detailed heritage.
Award: Paint Bucket Award - This horse looks as if an artist took a bucket of brown paint and tossed it on one side of him, but missed the other and left a white canvas. Very pretty!
Otto
Name: 9/10 - Nice way to incorporate a common word.
Color/Conformation: 10/10
Persona Reality: NA - as I said in an earlier eval...personas really do help. But I cant give a 0 if you just dont have one
Pics: 7/10 - All very nice, but the first picture you have on the page doesn't match the others. You can see in the first pic that the horse has a solid rump, while the other two horses are mostly white. Eye markings are also different.
Heritage: 10/10 - isn't Apache in there somewhere? that would explain all the breeds
Offspring: NA
Show Record: 10/10 - wow! Very nice for his age, and also detailed and organized.
Rarity of Breed: NA - this is for pure or 2 breed horses only, that are not Arabs or tb’s
Page Organization: 10/10 - cant find any faults
Comments - Nice guy overall, with some more popularity and work on people knowing his name, he will go far.
~Otto
(Quick suggestion: personalities are helpful in eveluations. Since you didnt do it for any of your horses, I changed it to overall, but personas really do help)
Lightening Strikes
Name: 10/10
Heritage: 5/10
Show Record: 8/10
Pictures: 9/10
Overall: 9/10
Total: 41/50, 82%, B-
Comments: Nice horse overall, could use more detailed heritage.
Award: Paint Bucket Award - This horse looks as if an artist took a bucket of brown paint and tossed it on one side of him, but missed the other and left a white canvas. Very pretty!
Otto
Name: 9/10 - Nice way to incorporate a common word.
Color/Conformation: 10/10
Persona Reality: NA - as I said in an earlier eval...personas really do help. But I cant give a 0 if you just dont have one
Pics: 7/10 - All very nice, but the first picture you have on the page doesn't match the others. You can see in the first pic that the horse has a solid rump, while the other two horses are mostly white. Eye markings are also different.
Heritage: 10/10 - isn't Apache in there somewhere? that would explain all the breeds
Offspring: NA
Show Record: 10/10 - wow! Very nice for his age, and also detailed and organized.
Rarity of Breed: NA - this is for pure or 2 breed horses only, that are not Arabs or tb’s
Page Organization: 10/10 - cant find any faults
Comments - Nice guy overall, with some more popularity and work on people knowing his name, he will go far.
~Otto